YSCHOOL GIẢI ĐỀ THI THẬT – Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2 – Đề thi ngày 13/01

Some people argue that putting efforts into preventing animal extinction is not necessary, as it is an inevitable natural process. I completely disagree with this point of view.

It is absurd to argue that animal extinction is a natural process. Human activities such as deforestation, overfishing, and pollution are without a doubt the number one cause of species loss. For instance, developed countries with fast-growing populations and their insatiable demand for resources are wiping out habitats like never before, putting many species at the brink of extinction. Therefore, blaming mother nature for the decline in species diversity or extinction only diverts attention away from the dangerous impact humans have on animals. If nations’ development and population growth continue unchecked, the serious loss of animal species will continue and we will face many consequences.

I believe protecting all species and preventing their extinction are worthwhile for many reasons. To begin with, animals have an important role in maintaining the balance of the ecosystem. This is important since a healthy ecosystem can ensure sufficient food availability to all living organisms, including humans. If a species becomes extinct, they are taken out from the food chain, which means the animals that feed on these newly-extinct species might starve. Secondly, animals help people in many ways. Aside from being a source of food, some animals act as a shield for diseases. For example, livestock, mice or horses are generally the preferred target for mosquitoes and other disease-bearing pests. If one of these species were to be endangered, then humans would be more at risk of getting the disease.

In conclusion, extinction is not exactly a natural process, and I believe that we should do everything we can to protect animal species.

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