BÀI MẪU IELTS WRITING TASK 2 NGÀY 24/3/2024
Đề bài
Parents are putting a lot pressure on their children to succeed. What are the reasons for this? Is it a positive or negative development?
Phân tích đề bài
Dạng bài: 2 – question essay
Keywords cần lưu ý: parents, pressure, children, succeed
Độ khó: Trung bình – Nội dung và câu hỏi trong đề không quá xa lạ với thí sinh nhưng việc lựa chọn idea có thể gây cho thí sinh một số khó khăn, do khái niệm “áp lực” (pressure) có thể mơ hồ với một số bạn.
Cách tiếp cận trong bài mẫu
- Ý kiến tổng quan: Có nhiều lý do tại sao việc này xảy ra và đây là một xu hướng có hại.
- Body 1: Trình bày 2 lý do tại sao cha mẹ gây áp lực lên con cái.
- Body 2: Trình bày 2 tác hại của việc này đối với con cái.
Band điểm ước tính cho bài viết mẫu: 7.5
Bài mẫu
It is true that many parents are placing too much pressure on their children in today’s world. There could be several reasons for this, and I consider it to be a very negative trend.
There are several reasons why some parents feel the need to exert pressure on their children. The leading cause of this stems from the concern for their children’s future employment. This is because the job market has become extremely crowded, so job search is more competitive than ever before. Consequently, parents put considerable stress on their children so that they can pursue academic excellence which is, in their belief, the key to success in life. Another reason may be because they are trying to correct their past mistakes by imposing their ideals upon children. It is possible that these parents have many regrets in the past, so they might wonder what they would do differently and force their children to execute it.
Putting too much pressure on the young comes with many negative effects. Firstly, high levels of pressure can lead to higher rates of mental illness. Children who are under constant pressure can experience chronic stress and anxiety, which will hurt their social life and even academic performance. In addition, always pushing young people to their limits can erode their self-esteem and make them feel like they will never be good enough no matter how hard they try. For example, a child who is not the best in his Chinese class might quit learning Chinese altogether because of the fear of being judged by their parents and others. As a result, children might never take a chance to hone their skills and shine.
To sum up, while it is somewhat understandable for parents to place pressure upon their children, taking it to an extreme might be counterproductive and might hurt the young in many ways.
Highlight keywords
- exert pressure (phrase): gây ra áp lực
- chronic stress and anxiety (noun phrase): stress và lo âu kéo dài
- To hone one’s skills (phrase): mài dũa kỹ năng
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